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Post by Luxliev on Oct 19, 2014 14:32:17 GMT
Album: null Released: 10.2014
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Post by SilverFox Jams on Nov 13, 2014 19:18:37 GMT
Interesting melody and nice choice of synth. I think halfway through, it got a bit too repetitive, and some of the notes were off in places. I think this track needs some beats, and different synths. More bass, too! There should be a lot more depth and variations to make this sound a lot better.
It will appeal much more to the listener if you do all this. I suggest you try these things sometime. Experiment! Do different things, for it's a sure way to develop and grow as a musician, and I say this from my own experience. See what sounds well and what doesn't.
Okay, I'll listen to another original track, one of your most recent ones--and leave my thoughts there.
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Post by Luxliev on Nov 13, 2014 20:20:22 GMT
I like this track a lot. It's one of my first songs I ever made. I'm self-taught composer so my music knowledge is not my strongest point. If you see some notes off then they are there basicly because I thought they fit there . Probably I'll try to remake this version with more instruments but for now I need to make more new tracks which isn't easy as making music is unfortunately more like a hobby right now instead of full time job.
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Post by SilverFox Jams on Nov 13, 2014 20:37:01 GMT
As long as you keep at it! You'll get better. It's good you like this track now, though once you develop more of an ear and skill as a composer, that may change.
I did this one really bad track called "Welcome to Egypt", and I thought it was great after I first finished it, years ago. Not so much now. I only like the beginning part. I went overboard on the rest! Some of the animal sounds were too loud! I don't have the loop files anymore, so I can redo that one.
Music making is a hobby for me too, and I put a lot of time into it.
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